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Before he left he said to me this,
We can’t win, we are worn out by now.
Our relationship like most relationships has came to an end.No I don’t blame you.I blame both of us.
I love you and as long as I breath I will love you.
But I can’t share my life with you anymore.
And for that I’m not sorry, because I can see that you too are tired of this, us.
And because I love you I don’t want to hear you say that I’m your life and your goin to die without me,cause you wont.
You will be strong you are going to get through any pain and doudt you have.
Why?
Because we had something amazing together.You learned from me and I from you.
You can be sad that is over, is only natural.
But I know that after a while you will be happy again, living your life the way you want without anyone holding you back.
Don’t say I am your life, you are so much better than this.
All I want from you is ,when you are old and ready to go,to look back at your life and smile, only smile.
We can’t win, we are worn out by now.
Our relationship like most relationships has came to an end.No I don’t blame you.I blame both of us.
I love you and as long as I breath I will love you.
But I can’t share my life with you anymore.
And for that I’m not sorry, because I can see that you too are tired of this, us.
And because I love you I don’t want to hear you say that I’m your life and your goin to die without me,cause you wont.
You will be strong you are going to get through any pain and doudt you have.
Why?
Because we had something amazing together.You learned from me and I from you.
You can be sad that is over, is only natural.
But I know that after a while you will be happy again, living your life the way you want without anyone holding you back.
Don’t say I am your life, you are so much better than this.
All I want from you is ,when you are old and ready to go,to look back at your life and smile, only smile.
He's words for is what love is all about.
So tell me what you think about it.
Also English isn't my first language so if you find any spellings please kindly point them out
Thank you for reading!!
I JUST DON'T KNOW IF THAT CLARIFIES AS A POEM OR PROSE PLEASE HELP
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So tell me what you think about it.
Also English isn't my first language so if you find any spellings please kindly point them out
Thank you for reading!!
I JUST DON'T KNOW IF THAT CLARIFIES AS A POEM OR PROSE PLEASE HELP
You can also check out my gallery is free!!!
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Your English is pretty good C: ut you had a few spelling errors. There were more punctuation errors, however.
And, as for the poetry/prose question, this could be considered free verse poetry or prose poetry. c:
And, as for the poetry/prose question, this could be considered free verse poetry or prose poetry. c: